THREADS: The Fabric of the
Universe
By Tom Tinney
As
the title implies, there are many disconnected threads in this plot. As the story slowly progresses, the stray
threads start weaving into a pattern you think you recognize. Then, boom, you realize you’re looking at the
design backwards and upside down. Made
me step back and go WOW! Okay, didn’t
see that coming.
The
premise of the plot was original and very well thought out. Tinney also does a great job explaining the
background of each society i.e.: Exodus, MetroStellar and the Kutari Panant. If you are a techno-nerd or a hard sci-fi
buff, this is the story for you. Every
gadget and environment explained in detail.
Actually, too much detail for my taste.
All that detail really bogs down the pace of the story, especially in
the first half of the book. The only
techno gadgets I didn’t think was plausible were the body mods that the USS
Marshals wore. The pain would be
incredible.
Lots
of characters in this story, but none of them lost in each other, unless done
intentionally. The main characters are
Matt & his brother Mark. I also felt
for the lost soul of Jon Brooks and the plight of Popilla. And then there is the sadistic and evil
pervert. Tinney does have problems with
dialogue, too stilted and stuffy.
Towards the end, he actually loosens up a bit. And a little more description of emotions
would have been helpful too.
The
book is 500 plus pages with a lot of back story. Most help with the plot, but the Freedom
Fleet and the mini story with Brooklyn’s daughter reciting the rise of the current
political system did not help the plot move along. These are some “Darlings” that should have
been cut.
The
writing style is passive, past tense.
The pace of the story would benefit greatly if it was written in more of
an aggressive style, present tense. The
story would flow better and the readers could get more involved with the action
and characters.
Before
I got to the end, I hoped there would be a sequel. And there is.
Tinny leaves enough unanswered questions for the reader to want to read
the next book. What did Berlin Wright
have to do with Jon Brook and his brother James? HMMM.
I
really did enjoy this story but there were times I started skimming pages
because of the overabundance of unnecessary information. And then there were the numerous proofreading
errors.
As
stated above, if you like hard core sci-fi and techno gadgets, I highly
recommend the book, but if you’re only into light sci-fi, maybe not. I would give this book 4 feathers.
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