THE REUNION by A.A. Pencil
Lauryn
Parker throws a 10 year high school reunion to flaunt her stardom in the face
of her ex-classmates. But things go horribly wrong. Or do they?
This is a wonderful, scary story with a plot within a plot.
Reading the story I kept thinking of the movie CLUE, but with a maniacal twist.
There is a wide range of characters, and they each have their own distinctive personalities.
We probably all know someone they will remind you of. There’s the triangle with
Tyler, Taylor and Paige, the unrequited love of Remington and Julian, and then
Samantha with her flock of hovering males. And of course the pregnant
Annabelle. The POV moves around from person to person, but there’s never any
confusion who is talking or who the POV should be. Very well done. My only confusion was with the names. So many of them could be male or female and was
usually opposite of what I thought.
My one qualm with the plot is it’s pretty fast-paced until the
Reader finally understands what’s really happening, then it slows down as more
background has to be told. I thought the last chapter was frivolous, just the
author trying to fill in too much detail, but once I got to the epilogue, I
understood why that chapter was there. The final ending made both plots seem
even creepier.
This book was released through a small publishing house, but they
obviously didn’t spend money on a proofreader/editor. This book has so many
missing words, wrong words and inconsistent usage of words, they ruined my
reading enjoyment. Fire place vs
fireplace. Shot gun vs shotgun. All these errors just take away from what
should have been a very good story.
Also, the author must not know anything about guns. Shotguns do
not shoot large bullets; they shoot pellets or buckshot, in a spray pattern.
The terminology for the end of the gun is the butt, recoil for back force and
most shotguns need to be pumped before they are fired and most only hold two
rounds. Google is a great tool for writers to use to research things they do
not know or understand.
I really enjoyed this story and highly recommend if you want a
good fright. But due to the above stated factors, I have to give only 3
feathers. Indie Authors need to be accountable for poorly published books.
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