CHARLIE: CHARLIE by L Sommers
This
is a very different type of story format, and I applaud L Sommers for writhing
outside the box. Two different first person
POV’s , but both named Charlie, male: female.
Two people who have such an attraction for each other, that it changes
their lives. And there’s definitely the
steamy, forbidden sex. This is a fun,
light, fanciful tale of finding your soul mate.
L
Sommers also broke the box by writing in the active voice (present tense), instead
of the passive (past tense). Most
writers use passive for everything.
Unfortunately, the passive voice comes out when we write. It’s just a natural occurrence. I saw too many past tense words being used
with present tense and vice-a-versa. I
also thought the writing didn’t flow very well and was pretty stilted.
All
in all, this was an enjoyable read and a nice way to spend some time so I give
it 3 feathers.
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